Hi it,s Ashley i think your writting is really good but i think you scholud put in more decribing words and not casual word that we use evey day but over all you did a pretty good job. From Ashley
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Hi it,s Ashley i think your writting is really good but i think you scholud put in more decribing words and not casual word that we use evey day but over all you did a pretty good job.
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